A proficient evaluation however this could be improved. 1] Gender[spelling error ‘my’ instead of ‘by’ 2] add in much more detail about how you represented these groups eg features? You should use all your planning, class work and theory - you could make this an excellent post. Consider exactly how you represented young males/ females/ student groups/ a digital audience etc. Go for Level 4 Ryan.
I am pleased you made the improvements - in A2 consider how and why you use a prezi presentation. Think about the amount of text and images and the way a prezi works by using interlinked bubbles. You have a proficient evaluation here and consider this when you develop your skills next year.
A proficient evaluation however this could be improved. 1] Gender[spelling error ‘my’ instead of ‘by’ 2] add in much more detail about how you represented these groups eg features? You should use all your planning, class work and theory - you could make this an excellent post. Consider exactly how you represented young males/ females/ student groups/ a digital audience etc. Go for Level 4 Ryan.
ReplyDeleteI am pleased you made the improvements - in A2 consider how and why you use a prezi presentation. Think about the amount of text and images and the way a prezi works by using interlinked bubbles. You have a proficient evaluation here and consider this when you develop your skills next year.
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